My new rap song, what do you think?

introduce the new **** fad


a cigarette from Marlboro brand


but there are side effects with this stuff


pneumonia, sore throat and a lil cough


if each cheroot that you take was a Russian roulette


would you smoke incessantly or stop doing that?


or I have to use another metaphor to make you understand


so you tried to be a valiant but you look like a mad


you run yourself in the ground just to get the next pack


dady approves he smokes crack, chip off the old block


you're ashamed to smile 'cause your teeth are coloured black


for all this **** you spend more than dozens bucks


when your purse gets empty you'll know it pretty sucks


the industry uses harsh words to criticize


'cause this is the only way to make you realize


if it's not enough they added posters in every size


so when you buy one packet it will catch your eyes


" a skull and cross bones like every silly caution


I'll never stop smoking that's the hottest fashion"

My new rap song, what do you think?
my rating: eh!
Reply:i like the thought- but the lines suck and sometime dont even rhyme
Reply:pretty crappy
Reply:Well, it doesnt have to rhyme and i mean its alrite...i suppose. And i like the mesasge so keep it up and maybe work on a hook and beat, then post it as a sound clip, maybe people will like it more.
Reply:rap stinks so who cares!!



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